Dear Mr Manmohan Singh,
Disappointment in how the Indian Police handled rape cases
I’m disappointed in how the Indian Police has handled rape cases that occurred in India. After reading the article about the recent rape case that occurred in New Delhi, India, I feel that, the way police has handled cases in India is very atrocious. The police merely ask the victim to drop the charges against the rapists and even ask the victim to marry the rapist. I feel that this is utterly atrocious and I’m utterly disappointed in how the Indian Government has also failed to ask the Indian police to improve on how they handle rape cases.
Not only the status of women in India is low, but they also get blamed for almost everything. They are required to wear traditional clothes even though its already in the twenty-first century! They are also not allowed to use hand phones as others say that using hand phones are reasons why more elope cases occur.
Girls or women in India, are raped everywhere in India now a days. For example, the recent rape case in New Delhi, India. The girl was raped cruelly and the six rapists used their hands to remove her internal organs just through her private parts. The girl has also suffered heavy injuries in her private parts, and she was cruelly tormented. Her boyfriend could not even do anything to help. It took one and a half hours just for the injured pair to get to the hospital. As mentioned in the news, every single minute counts for a person who is dying. Police were late to arrive and they needlessly delayed. And because of this case, protests occurred. From a peaceful protest to a violent one. Not only Indian females protested. Even the turban male Sikh protested and a quote from what the male Sikh says: ‘Real men don’t rape’. I strongly feel that the government should do something and stop rape cases from happening so often by setting up more strict rules such as giving death penalty to those that rape. This might reduce much more rape cases in India. Thank you for taking your time to read this letter.
Yours sincerely,
Catherine
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Only type out number that are under 20. and at the end u should type it like this :
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