Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Exposition Writing [Draft 1]

Name: Catherine Kung  3E1 (Draft 1)
      
               Challenges faced by parents these days aren’t easy. They need to work, cook, earn money to provide their children. Need to face the economic crisis, children’s performances in school and their work. They faced so many challenges, everyday but yet they don't show it on their faces in front of their children.
              Parents work is most important. It helps them to earn money to provide their family and they even work overtime to get a larger salary to give their children better living conditions. But children, like teenagers, don't appreciate it. They complain about not giving them enough pocket money, all they do is work, work, work. Never spare a thought for them.
              When their children are complaining, deep down inside, all they actually wanted was their parents to show their love for them. Their children complain but the parent didn't blame them because they actually know the consequences for working long hours. Similarly, when parents got their day off, their children also complain that their parents keep bothering them like a bee attracted to a flower. This made their parents so confused, that even themselves do not know what is good or bad for their children, because all parents wishes was to provide even better things for their children. All they need was a support was us, their children.
            All they need after their work was to go back home, take a relaxing shower, meals being prepared by us, everything in the house is neat and most importantly, a word of ‘Thank You’ from their beloved children. That is all they can ever asked for, yet this is rarely seen in the century. Parent’s love for their children is greater than any other love. It is just so strong that parents themselves are unable to show it to their children that they love them.

           To me, I feel that children like us don't appreciate what our parents have done for us. Doing odd jobs, providing us for education, make sure that we don't go hungry, just everything that they do, we as children are indebt to them. They took care of us when we were young, so when they are old, we will take care of them and repay their love to us back, our parents are like our hero and heroine in our lives. If I got the chance, I would like to tell them that I love them as much as they do.

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