Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Exposition Writing [Draft 2]

Name: Catherine Kung  3E1 (Draft 2)
      
              ‘Bitterness first sweetness last’, this may look like an easy job but the process to sweetness is tough. For example the challenges faced by parents these days are not easy. They need to work, cook, and earn money to provide for their children. They also need to face the economic crisis, children’s performances in school and their work. They faced so many challenges, everyday but yet they dare not show it on their faces in front of their children. I feel that their job as a parent is not as easy as it looks.
              Especially for parents, their work is most important. It helps them to earn money to provide for their family and they even work overtime to get a larger salary to give their children better living conditions. Children, like teenagers, do not even appreciate what they did for them. They even complain about not giving them enough pocket money. All they do is work, work, and work, even when they have a bit of a free time also unable to spare for them.
              Parents not only they have to work, they also need to pacify their children. Their children made it so contradicting that even they do not know what their children want.  For example when parents are busy with their work, their children complain. Similarly, when parents got their day off, their children also complain that their parents keep bothering them like a bee attracted to a flower.
            All parents wishes that after their work was to go back home, take a relaxing shower, meals being prepared by us, everything in the house is neat and most importantly, a word of ‘Thank You’ from their beloved children. That is all they can ever ask for, yet this is rarely seen in the century. Parent’s love for their children is greater than any other love. It is just so strong that parents themselves are unable to show it to their children that they love them.
           To me, I feel that children like us are not grateful towards what our parents have done for us. Doing odd jobs, provide us with education, make sure that we do not go hungry, just everything that they do, we as children are indebted to them. They took care of us when we are young, so when they are old, we will take care of them and repay their love to us back; our parents are like our hero and heroine in our lives. If I got the chance, I would like to tell them that I love them as much as they do.


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